1/2 on 222

As we are rapidly approaching half time on our reading project for the first semester of 2016, I would like you to take a break and reflect on your work so far. Are you satisfied calmwith your progress? What would you like to do differently for the remaining time? Have you got all the required genres covered? Do you need help on choosing or acquiring new reading material? Are there any questions on what you have already done? Please answer these questions in a comment to this blog post.

Most of you have completed a number of books from a variety of different genres – congratulations on your accomplishments!

Once you published your comment, please use this lesson to make sure you have

  • updated your own 222 page on your blog
  • left a comment about the books you completed on the 5 owls 222 post
  • thought about which book you’d like to do the detailed review for

Moreover, don’t forget to decide on a topic for your 222 essay, which will most likely either be a comparison of main characters or key ideas in at least two of your books. Should you already have an idea, please come and see me about it.

Regarding your blogs, please make sure you remember who your blog buddies are, visit their blogs and leave a quality comment for them. Also check your own blog and make sure you have reacted to all previous comments. Use the rest of today’s lesson to work on the blog tasks you haven’t finished yet. As always you can find all assignments on the 5owls assignment page.

 

A 222 review

A review is a type of text that examines the quality of something or someone. As a part of the 222 challenge, your grading and the preparation for the FCE exam this year, you have to choose one of your 222 books and write a  review for it that consists of an introduction (author, genre, key elements, …), a short summary of the plot (+characters;… no spoliers), your opinion (what you liked, disliked, comparisons, …) and a conclusion (recommendation?, …). Additionally, think about a catchy title. Your text should have at least 250 words and it should be posted before the Christmas break. If you choose a comic book or graphic novel, don’t forget to include the visualisation in your verdict. Below is an example for one of the books I chose.

 

Road trippin’ through Zombieland

Alden Bell’s post-apocalyptic zombie novel The Reapers are the Angels (Holt Paperbacks; 2010) revolves around a young girl’s quest for redemption and a sense of purpose in a frail, crumbling society.  Temple, who seems much older than fifteen, travels through a devastated America to fulfil a stranger’s last wish.  She comes across hordes of undead that devour indiscriminately and remnants of humankind that try to retain some humanity while surviving the world that comes so natural to her, the world she has been born into. The protagonist is far from the helpless, innocent zombie bait as often portrayed onscreen – she is a hardened survivor, a skilled opportunist and no one you would like to have as an enemy, especially not in the deadly wilderness that surrounds the tiny specks of human civilisation.

Temple (she sometimes calls herself Sarah Mary Williams – allusion to Huck Finn?) prefers travelling alone as her gruesome past is still haunting her and she never wants anybody to be dependent on her ever again. She comes across a small community of survivors, who want to take her in – but soon enough one of the men tries to force himself on her and she kills him in self-defence. The man’s brother, Moses Todd – who is a killer, a force of nature with a knack for tracking – swears to take revenge and pursues Temple, who is fleeing the alleged safety of human community to her own flavour of safety – the zombie infested wasteland.  She continues her travels and meets a variety of colourful people, among them the helpless, mentally challenged Maury, whom she – despite herself – comes to feel responsible for. While fighting off zombies, mutants and the deadly Moses Todd, Temple is determined to take her charge to his family, who might still be alive in Texas.

Alden Bell’s debut novel was recommended by a member of my book community and what I had thought to be another copycat YA story in a genre that grows staler by the minute, turned out to be quite a page turner with a surprising, genre-defying end. This book shoudn’t be considered YA even if the main character is only fifteen. Her age makes the character of Temple all the more haunting. Some scenes, moreover, are mature or explicit and the author did not hold back with the violence and gore. Temple’s encounters during her trip ranged from entertaining to harrowing and served as incidents to display even more of the interesting “heroine”, whether she tried to charm survivors or hacked away at them with her Ghurkha knife. The story’s conclusion suited and elevated the novel.

While the feeling of a post-apocalyptic road movie with slight undertones of Justin Cronin’s Twelve was enjoyable, I often found myself distracted by the harsh contrast between the narrator, Temple’s inner voice and her Southern-ish speech type. The three didn’t seem to come together at times and disrupted an otherwise seamlessly flowing story. Although my expectations were low initially, I came to appreciate The Reapers are the Angels – maybe even more for bringing a new spirit and some truly interesting characters to the genre.

 

“Beyond the pursuit of meaning and beyond good and evil too, she says. See, it’s a daily chore tryin to do the right thing. Not because the right thing is hard to do—it ain’t. It’s just cause the right thing—well, the right thing’s got a way of eluding you. You give me a compass that tells good from bad, and boy I’ll be a soldier of the righteous truth. But them two things are a slippery business, and tellin them apart might as well be a blind man’s guess.” Temple, The Reapers are the Angels

A truthful drabble

Students frequently complain about the high wordcount associated with writing in their classes. Particularly in English some find it a challenge to come up with enough words to satisfy a given requirement when writing creatively or academically. Thus, for your next post in creative writing I would like to turn the premise around and limit the number of words you may use to 100. As I would like you to create a drabble, the wordcount is neither arbitrary nor negotiable – your text has to have 100 words exactly (In our case the title may or may not count). So there shouldn’t be reason for complaints this time.

How to – drabble:

a drabble is a [fictional] text and can be considered one of the very short forms of writing. Although it is short by nature, it still consists of a beginning, a middle and an end. The beginning is used to set up the story, it then progresses in the middle and comes to a conclusion in the end. A drabble can be about anything and they often have a twist/surprise at the end. For our class, however, I want you to write a drabble that is true –  something that actually happened.

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Start by gathering ideas and writing a first draft. Usually this draft will be too long, so a phase of editing will follow. You should cut the non-essential parts without severely damaging the core message of your narration. Finally publish your text and do not forget to comment by October 23rd. I gave it a try and posted one truthful example underneath. A second text is provided to show you how the professionals do it:

Selective Fire Hazard!?
By Forestdweller

In 2006 I went to the Nova Rock with friends. Lacking festival experience – we mostly improvised.

One item deemed essential was a makeshift grill – a gas cartridge and an A4 sized grillage. Many times we tried to smuggle the forbidden elements inside: hidden in a backpack, inside the sleeping bag, underneath our jackets… in vain – the guards always stopped us. Finally we staged a fight – Alex and I passionately yelled at each other, while Sam squeezed through with the contraband…Soon our lukewarm goulash tasted like victory!

An hour later we found an official stall that sold camping grills.

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TIMELESS
By Michelle Brueger

I’ve always been a daddy’s girl. On road trips, we competed over who sported the most hawks first. Our favorite competition was, upon seeing each other, who could say the words “I love you best” first. If I got him first, Dad would reply, “I’ll get you—just wait.”

My dad died the night before my 50th birthday. The next day, Mom brought me a gift, saying, “This is from your dad. He bought it for you five years ago.” Inside was a beautiful gold pocket watch. Engraved on the inside were the words I love you best—Gotcha.

Your picture is worth around 200 words

createThink of the picture you drew and use whatever you have come up with during the free association in class to create a text or part of a text. This text should be around 200 words long and contain three vocabulary items (put in bold) which are new for you and seem of value for the future of your writing. Except for these two criteria, anything goes – write an interior monologue, a speech, a letter, a dialogue, a poem, an adventure, a death scene….
Your text only has to have a minor connection to the picture, so do not feel limited by what you have been dealt.

Do not forget to provide a suitable title and please let your readers know what kind of picture you got at the very end of your post.
Once finished, please check your blog buddies’ posts and comment on them. Follow the commenting guidelines and do not merely congratulate them.
If necessary correct and revise your text according to your readers’ suggestions and put a second version in your original post.

Your text has to be published by Saturday the 15th. Please tag it as “creative writing”.